In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case do you think this is a positive or negative situation

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
Why might this be the case?
do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In this day and age, people are more and more struggling to have their own home instead of renting one. While this practice can push the socio-economy by hard-working people for their dream home, I believe that having one put heavy pressure on many people, especially young men.
There are several reasons why a person needs a private home. Firstly, owning a property not only represents ones financial capability but also symbolizes how independent he is from his family. In my country, for example, affected by East culture or oriental culture, has a traditional notion that a man has to move out, making money, and get married himself, unless the man can be said that he is not able to stand on his feet or even be underestimated. Realistically, even in modern life, if a man is incapable of achieving his own things like a home, he also cannot take care of another person such as his wife and children which means he is not qualified to build his own family.
Meanwhile, attempting to have their own home brings some drawbacks that made people miserable. Despite urging purchasing a home, the property price skyrocket endlessly, this is nothing more than exhausted one’s labor. Some people have to work from day to night to save up for a home, a lot of whom got terrible diseases because of neglecting their health or even killed themselves to exit from the working pressure. Besides, although have worked hard, a lot of people still are not able to purchase a home so they decide to rent an apartment and be single for life, a not bad idea.
In conclusion, although owning a home is encouraged, a person should constantly ask himself the purpose of being and pursue his own aim to a life that is worth living.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...own aim to a life that is worth living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68316831683 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65776378767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9765792103 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249897264393 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104560602529 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476177271321 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152841933065 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589657456742 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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