Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There is a controversy that whether people should accept an unexpected situation or make an effort to improve it. Although accepting and living with these things for life is sometimes reasonable, I strongly believe that we should address and prove such situations.
On the one hand, those, who argue that accepting an unwanted situation is the best way, usually have two reasons below. Firstly, people who have already experienced a bad situation will be suffered a lot of pain. Therefore, if they can get through and consider these things as a part of their life, it would be less painful. Secondly, it is also less time consuming than trying to handle such situations, especially the unimportant one, and sometimes not everything can be solved. For example, if you broke up with your partner because of her disloyalty, you may prefer to accept that reality rather than try to keep with her.
On the other hand, in my point of view, I believe that we should try to deal with the problem as long as it is still workable. First of all, some situations can be changed toward a better one. To illustrate, if student get bad marks in school despite their effort, they should not be sad for a long time and only accept that. They have to study harder or figure out a solution for their problems anyway instead. Besides, to be successful, giving up easily is not a good way. It is true that after we address a terrible situation no matter there is plenty of difficulties, we will be more mature. Hence, attempt to face and solve such situations precisely is also the best way.
In conclusion, although it is sometimes challenging and demanding to deal with an awful situation, I believe that it will be more beneficial if we try to improve such a problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...al if we try to improve such a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67961165049 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63775685574 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6595910704 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276769349865 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923776353576 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572675255367 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176704562457 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298456821848 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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