In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In modern life, particularly in several nations, people tend to buy than to rent a house or an apartment. In this essay, we will find reasons that drive people to this situation. Regarding some benefits of owning a home to live in, I believe the drawbacks of this phenomenon outweigh the positive effects.
To commence with, numerous reasons that make individuals feel challenged for them to rent houses rather than purchasing them. But the major one is owning a house is considered a measurement of how successful an individual got in their job, particularly in developing countries since people will think that person has a high-payment salary or high bonus payment. Moreover, while others are still struggling for the monthly rent, house owners are no longer thinking about those fees, so they can spend that money for other purposes. Another reason for this situation is they want to settle their future life at an early age. For example, individuals who want to have children, they have more concerns for their family such as job, raising their children. As a result, humans have always been fond of owning a house to reduce their future anxiety.
Despite the advantages people get by buying houses are undeniable, they have to face a huge stress of owning a home since this situation will force them to work harder when they were young to earn a significant amount of money to buy houses. In some cases, this stress can cause the opposite effect as it can lead them to debt. Furthermore, they have to exchange their time and money to achieve this milestone, and the amount of time they have to purchase might be a lot. Therefore, this situation propels humans to sacrifice their young life to earn a much stable future.
In conclusion, there are many reasons that explain why people purchase a house in particular nations, but this situation seems to bring more negative effects than positive counterpart, especially for young adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...than purchasing them. But the major one is owning a house is considered a measurement of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90881458967 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59416037583 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1647147738 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311968719521 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108497601476 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515110947666 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2051689877 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040182094572 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.