In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
The bankruptcy of numerous small stores in town is occurring in some nations as people are likely to drive to bigger malls outside the town. Therefore, this development creates difficulty for people without cars to do shopping and encourages the number of cars being used. However, I still believe that this trend will bring about more pros than cons.
First of all, It is obvious that the larger the mall is, the more products are sold. Specifically, large stores will cooperate with lots of entrepreneurs and companies in different areas from local to international ones. As a result, these stores can import a vast number as well as a variety of goods to serve their customers from toys, clothes, foods and so on, so the public will be presented with wider choices to buy than in smaller ones.
Moreover, commercial centers in the suburbs are now like a destination for a family bonding activity. For example, they incorporate amenities that meet the needs for recreation of individuals such as restaurants for them to enjoy meals with their loved ones or playgrounds for children to play while their parents go shopping. Hence, people come to these places just like a trip for them to escape from the daily pressure and spend time together. Besides purchasing for things, relatives can share the love and joy that they rarely do in their daily hectic life.
In addition, the increasing use of cars may not be a disturbing sign. In fact, it can bring some advantages. Since residents are beginning to own more cars now, it reflects that the living standards of them have raised. For instance, after working diligently and earning money, people want to possess a car to take their family members on a trip for recreational activities and let go of their responsibilities. Finally, the rate of using cars to travel out of town also contributes to the reduction of traffic congestion. In small towns, especially on weekends, families tend to go out and enjoy downtime with each other. This can lead to traffic jams on roads and shops can be overcrowded, thus having a car is an excellent idea for people to visit outside peaceful areas and have precious time with their members.
To sum up, the phenomenon of driving outwards to large out-of-town stores offers some great benefits to everybody and the increase in the use of cars also seems positive for the life of them.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86240786241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67509464093 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570024570025 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0600318246 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.944444444 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305281957165 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932860618999 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908400834126 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182281377327 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1137243948 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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