In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve everything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving this massage?
In the initial years of development of children its crucial guideline and support from their parent. In certain countries, the young generation is taught to work hard and with this attitude can achieve every goal in life. There are many positive aspects, for example, assist to develop confidence and high moral however disadvantages are minimal, for instance overly ambitious. In this essay, we are going to discuss both sides of the aspects.
Firstly, the main important factor is with high determination and moral courage half success can be obtained, because the mind is a powerful center to compile thoughts and processes. Full cognitive coverage fully supported by positive emotion improves performance and integration. An individual can easily be distracted and dishearted by failures in life and goals can not get by a single attempt. At that point, it's easy to quit because of negative comments by others and at that week stage need some commitment and persistence. For example, in India annually 55 percent of children either run from schools or suicide because of fear of failure and embarrassment.
Secondly, Another positive impact is the self-confidence to take essential steps toward made choices in life. And after taking a specific decision in every matter have the resilience to do it not matter how difficult it is. For example, in survey young ones with parental support try more time in activities than dishearted ones.
However, there are less than fewer disadvantages of overly smart and ambitious personality formation. Although without knowing and thinking about anything to start have many negative impacts in term of financially. In case they are unable to do it.
In conclusion, along with mental sharpness improved emotional conditions help to analyzed matter in a logical way. In some cultures, older want their younger to learn that success follows the footsteps of people who try again and again with a lot of work. There are many crucial functions of this encouragement than its harmful effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22324159021 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82131597102 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.042073036 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125885660707 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352564886369 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347165631094 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621721461799 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308776689814 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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