Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In a world with a variety of products effective way to seek attention toward it is ads. According to some people point of view that commercialising things is an extremely successful project to convince others to purchase it while others say that advertisement everyday situation and it's unable to attract customers. The commercials on different products have many advantages than disadvantages it assists the search for product and sometimes develops desire thing just by an ad, however, it offends buyers. In this essay, we are going to discuss both points of view and perspectives about it.
Firstly, a positive impact on potential purchasers is the source of information about a specific product. Nowadays basic way individuals get to know regarding their purchase is through an online platform. Consumers whenever want to buy a particular thing investigate about that on internet and read reviews either positive or negative. Because they do not have time to went market to market to find out the best one. Therefore, a variety of adverts like pop-ups can be observed on online media platforms because the conventional type of advertising is no longer popular and effective.
Another important role is the need to develop on seeing ads as these look beautiful and sometimes they do not really want it. Some commercials are so captivating and persuade to buy it. For example, in online shopping women get more things than their requirements like clothes and when asked about reason is just attractive.
However, repetition of adverts over and over again loses interest in it and some people get offended. Just because of a lot of advertisement persons prefer youtube to watch rather than watching television and wasting time. It is also medically proven that on each repetition our brain becomes unresponsive.
In conclusion, Conveying specific information to others is communication and in business, it's called advertising. The global markets and its variation in products with globalisation, good ads will lead to business to new hight. Although, repeating commercials decrease its effectiveness but without its not possible get to know people about your goods. In my opinion, advertisement is an efficient way to sell your goods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ad reviews either positive or negative. Because they do not have time to went market to...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'market to'.
Suggestion: market to
.... Because they do not have time to went market to market to find out the best one. Therefore, a var...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'persuade' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...ercials are so captivating and persuade to buy it. For example, in online shopping wom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25698324022 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02147366039 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8222957928 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213475503345 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583690674723 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692468140251 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105306754505 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575421443255 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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