Nowadays more and more people are using consumer goods such as refrigerators and washing machines Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this Give your own opinion and examples
In this contemporary world, basic life necessities increased. According to many people the requirements for electric home appliances for example the fridge and washing clothes by machines enhanced because it becomes necessary for existance. These things have many more advantages like save time and assist in a better quality of life, but have some disadvantages need for electricity and pollution associated with electricity production. In this assay we are going to discuss both positive and negative aspects of these consumer products.
Firstly, most important benefit of these products, are time and energy saver. Many people who do jobs have less time and energy to complete their personal work. Such people have not worry about extra work at home for instance refregator store food for longer period of time and increase their stroage time, they can stock thing for rest of week and no need to do glossary on daily bases.
Secondly, the quality of life also exelrate as less money is spend on hiring a servant. When all family member work they need a maid for their work at home which cost more then buying a washing machine or other electric device which substitute his work. And this ammount could be utilsed on personal uses. for example per hour salary of made in US is 9 dollar which is more expensive then other devices.
On the other hand, as more electric appliances demands the more electric need, which indirectly associated with pollution. The electric power generated by nuclear powerplant causes much pollution in form of redation which is seriously harming all organisms. Other toxic gasses related from fridges and other products are affecting our environment directly by depleting the outer protective layer. For example, chloroform carbon is the most crucial gass which causing the greenhouse effect and climate change. Many species are extinct by global warming and because of the effect on their natural habitat along with that harmful ultraviolet rays causing different kinds of diseases in animals.
In conclusion, each and every invention bring some side effect in case of electric equipment too, it makes everyone life easy and better at the same time having adverse consequences on our life. there is a need for hour environment-friendly appliances should make which mitigate the effects we are already facing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19788918206 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65149318438 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593667546174 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7094334888 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137444139035 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429995788926 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500675526913 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770626452625 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593316464898 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.