Some people say that all students should study history as major subject, while others feels that other subject are more important in today society. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
According to some people point of view historical studies should be major choice by all students, but other group of people consider that in contemporary world other subjects which are scientific research related. more important to opt for. Both sectors have there own reasons for their opinion, first feels its beneficial to learn from history, while opposite group think modern problem require modern solution, I also agree with second. In this easy we will discuss both point of views and personal perspective on this point.
Some people argue that history should lies in first priority by any student because its provide important insight about our historical background and take notes from error in history. If something we have already done wrong then its helps to not perform same thing. For example, many unfair and instantly decision by our previous people which leads toward massive destruction by wars. And at the end of such atrocities we find nothing expect damage infrastructure and causalities. Therefore, everyone on any authority position should have knowledge about history mishaps and its consequences.
On other hand many other people believe that current society need professionals who can address pressing problem which also damaging our planet are environmental problems, mass poverty reduction and cheaper and excessive food production and many more. The population of world is increasing exponentially which also need food, and with population explosion demand for fuel and its combustion also enhanced. Which are leading toward global warming and climate change issues. Its historical proven that natural catastrophic die more people than wars. So, experts with educational knowledge and experience of new discoveries can potentially solve these issues because in history we can little know it.
In conclusion, two perspective collide with each other on preference toward major subject either history or currently needed subjects to study. History alone tell us about our past faults and its results, whereas scientific subject assist to tackle problem we are facing today. In my opinion people having interest in past civilization and culture can choose their respective field but most of consideration should pay toward more integrated field of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49147727273 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68288782357 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4420122827 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301155550597 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815725969091 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811967506159 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179305821136 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957888766329 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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