In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?
There is often to discussing about children are achieve any kind of goal if they try very hard enough. Children can achieve their goals from doing too must trying and trust themselves in performance when they grow up, there are drawbacks to be considered.
On the one hand, there are a number of advantages to children doing hard work to achieve their dreams. Firstly, children learn from their faculties, It means that when children try to solve any problem in school or in his life and fail to do it. they try to use another way or strategy to tackle their problems as a result they learn to use a variety of methods to solve their problems. For example, In my friend childhood, there are lot of problems to come out. In 10th standard, he was fail two times in the examination but he does not leave, my friend used to another method to learn again and the third time he was pass the exam in the 10th standard. Secondly, children learn to deal with social problems by trying a lot. So when he grows up, they can take a design about any situation and never give up.
On the other hand, One problem when children doing hard work to achieve anything is that children think that anything we can achieve as if it is illegal in their society. Parents should help their children to differentiate between things they can
do and things we could not achieve because of prohibition. For example, In North America, one child pass the exam for stole the examination paper and get passed the exam. It is illegal in their society. Another possible problem is that children are lose self
confidence when they try more with out any support from society or their own parents.
In conclusion, while children can benefit from their attempts when they try to achieve their dreams, parents are also support children and guide to their. Children are work hard and also maintain to self confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: achieved
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: lost
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Suggestion:
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63880597015 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37334271121 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468656716418 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8598278549 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333036997928 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132218916529 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969345180118 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20594438453 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105951165695 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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