It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children must learn about to the difference between right and wrong, this kind of phenomenon in punishment is the best way to teach children. I agree with the statement because this kind of learning must helpful for children and In their future.
To begin with, Children are learning all the subject but some knowledge they do not know about like positive or negative, right or wrong, correct or incorrect, true or false. secondery teaching school should provide this type of knowledge and also give to few examples. For instance, In USA, some secondery or kinder garden school is teaching about correct manners, right thinking ways and own security, children can not understand the situation teacher can punish, so children knew it was right and wrong.
Furthermore, parents are also include to teach their children and also learn about how to take security yourself. Nowadays, there are many kidnapping cases come out to the surface and one of the reason of this kidnappers gave chocolates to children everyday and one day they kidnap. For example, In India, teaching departments is very augmenting and also meditation about the children security, teachers also teach about how to save yourselves to the kidnappers.
On the other hand, Children can understand what is right and wrong they also make to the problem to their parents. They also knows about the rules and regulation in early ages so that take to uses of disadvantages of rules and regulation. To teach right or wrong any kind of child do not use to punishment method because they observe and remind again and again that why create a mental problem in their mind. For example, In Singapore, Parents Teach to his child with punishment method and child was create depression on his mind so that child was go to the terrace and throw itself to the garden.
To sum up, children are must learn about what is right and punishment also helpful them to learn this subject. parents and teachers responsibility to teach them and make the intelligent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Secondery
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...de this type of knowledge and also give to few examples. For instance, In USA, som...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...wrong. Furthermore, parents are also include to teach their children and also learn ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to the surface and one of the reason of this kidnappers gave chocolates to children ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... kidnappers gave chocolates to children everyday and one day they kidnap. For example, I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...w to save yourselves to the kidnappers. On the other hand, Children can understa...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...the problem to their parents. They also knows about the rules and regulation in early...
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Suggestion: created
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Suggestion: gone
...epression on his mind so that child was go to the terrace and throw itself to the ...
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Suggestion:
...terrace and throw itself to the garden. To sum up, children are must learn about...
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Suggestion: Parents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94985250737 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56697175367 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466076696165 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1566321434 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288031585491 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120667561161 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101987361356 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203306541781 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103068740038 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.