In some cultures, the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is true that in some communities the elder people are more respected, whereas in others the youngsters are valued in a greater way. This essay will explore both sides of the argument and will explain how both generations are important to build a proper society.
To begin with, in some regions, old people are deemed as paramount for the preservation of the local culture. This is because elders are capable to transfer their knowledge and experience to younger generations. Besides being able to acquire a better education, young people can take advantage of the previous mistakes done by elders and solve them straightforwardly. As a result, communities often consider elder people to be extremely important to enhance young individuals education and hence, elders are retributed with a plethora of benefits. To illustrate this, in Brazil, individuals over 70 obtain free access to transport and great discounts in supermarkets.
On the other hand, young generations comprise the workforce of the future. Young people are more valued in jobs due to their capacity of hardworking and because they are more likely to work for the long run. In contrast, older people fatigue more frequently and their work capabilities are lower than younger. As a consequence, some nations like South Africa provides job opportunities only for people from 20 to 50 years old and restrict working opportunities to elder people. However, I believe that elders do not have to be scrapped out society due to the fact that everything that we see in the world is created by older generations.
To conclude, although some cultures value more one generation than other, and regardless of elders lower capacity to work than youngers, every single community should value and respect either old and young generations owing to the fact that both contribute for the sake of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...be extremely important to enhance young individuals education and hence, elders are retribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, so, whereas, in contrast, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14191419142 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88786987156 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3864126201 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189921629183 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655577410118 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794121352961 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138405916852 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755136223011 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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