Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?
Uniform is mandatory for high school students in some countries like japan and china, while some nations doesn't tell what their students should wear to class. Even though people think that uniform is a sign of opression, it is actually have a lot of benefits.
First, some people think that children should be expressive and school schould not limit their creativity. Therefore, students should not be forced to wear a uniform to school. The idea is a good one, but uniforms are not to supress their freedom of expression. Its purpose is to remove boundaries between children, so there are no differences between kids from a rich family and a poor family. They could make friends without ashamed with their status. Furthermore, clothes are not the only way to channel their creativity, as almost all of high schools are teaching arts, literatures, and musics.
Another argument against uniform is that it makes children depressed because there are too many rules. Being too strict to a kid who is still developing is wrong, but it is the problem of the punishment, not the rules. Children need to be given responsibilities, because it teaches them to be a responsible and well-mannered adult. If they have too many freedom, they would be spoiled and always demanding. In this case, uniforms give them a responsibility. However, teachers should not scold their students if they don't follow the rules. On contrary, they should give them an educating punishment instead.
All in all, uniforms are one of the rules that should be applied in many schools, because it would help them understand the meaning of friendship and responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81147857269 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0844539343 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190214115693 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656389308378 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105353893843 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131813217288 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110212103217 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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