Some parents believe that watching tv and playing computer games should be Limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
In the era of technological development, every aspect of life needs some consideration, especially child care. Few parents think to lower time for watching Telly and playing video games and replace that time by books. In my opinion, I completely agree to substitute TV and games by reading books due to following reasons.
Firstly, book reading is one of the best activity. It doesn't affect your health and regular reading gives your brain a best workout. It also makes people smarter and gives a plenty of knowledge. For example, if someone likes to read books that are relevant to science, the Reader will get a plethora of information in advance which can also help them in their studies and allow them to think more and critically on a specific topic. Furthermore, people can bring their books with them anywhere and they don't need to hurt their eyes and brain. In short, reading is beneficial for everyone in all aspects and makes people more creative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85975609756 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59520533288 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7740090991 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199702375314 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802134267131 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760566127827 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171602030502 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883178338541 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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