Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
In the world where everyone is running behind money. I<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">t is often argued that job with high wage is far more essential than professional fulfillment. I completely disagree with this approach and I think job satisfaction is very much important than high salary.
Firstly, I believe that professional fulfillment keeps you motivated due to which a person can easily get success. In other words, people can grow their career when they love their job and enjoy performing their tasks. Doing what you like makes you feel motivated. For example, if a person choose his career on the basis of his interest then he will intend to </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">make</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> success in lesser time. </span>In s<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">hort, people should work what they like to do because job satisfaction and productivity has a strong relation with each other.
Secondly, money is not everything. People can not buy happiness with cash. Those who know that their well-being is their priority </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">and no wealth can buy it most. In addition, such type of people don't put their life on risk of having stress. On the otherside, when employees find a job of high salaries they may feel happy but this happiness doesn't remain for a long time because these type of hectic jobs will give a person too much stress and along with that they lose their mental peace and this thing becomes the major reason of their unhappy life. People who don't get stressed out because of their working loads as they are well aware of their ways of joy. For instance, majority of the people switch for quit their job due to mental stress because they think that only money is the basic need through which they can buy everything in the world even the internal peace, joy and happiness. That's why, this is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">than</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> focusing on high wages.
</span>In conclusion, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is of prime importance and advantageous than high salary because it keeps them motivated and happy and cut their mental stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50139275766 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14349125706 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5020297354 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.176470588 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133360580808 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555945802354 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642399267971 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120893139791 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482959791117 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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