Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Toys play a significant role in developing children's fine motor skills. One can not contemplate a juvenile without a toy. It is a hot topic to discuss whether we should or not buy a large number of playthings for young ones. This essay will reveal the advantages and disadvantages relating to the above - mentioning idea.
To begin with, let us discuss a few advantages associated with it. Firstly, kids love to play with toys and it makes them happy. When a child has many toys to play, they will develop various kinds of skills that will help them in future. Secondly, they have many choices to make everyday and it will help them to stay focused on their activities. They will not get bored of playing with the same toy everyday. For example, a recent study stated that the benefits that a kid will have holding and observing different types of objects.
On the contrary, allowing for too msny playthings has drawbacks. In the first place, the child who gets a new game on demand will be deprived of learnong one necessary aspect of life. They will never learn that sometimes the circumstances are unfavourable and they have to suppress their needs. Another drawback is, they may not play with all the games that we buy them. In this case, it is a wastage of money, which can be utilised for other important activities such as charity, donation.
To conclude, we can say that one should learn to live with the appropriate and necessary amount of items required for various kind of activites. I strongly concede with this thought and we should help children to learn that at times we need to understand and learn to live without such unnecessary demand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...to discuss whether we should or not buy a large number of playthings for young ones. This essay w...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ous kinds of skills that will help them in future. Secondly, they have many choices to ma...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...econdly, they have many choices to make everyday and it will help them to stay focused o...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... on their activities. They will not get bored of playing with the same toy everyday. For...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... get bored of playing with the same toy everyday. For example, a recent study stated tha...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To conclude, we can say that one should learn to live with the appropriate and n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71821305842 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57053571752 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0005022841 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287224021718 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881398211658 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051583851179 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165682353648 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943490400456 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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