Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Violent crime is extremely dangerous because it can directly affect on human life. There is a lot of controversy over which sanctions to apply to violent crimes in contemporary society. Some people believe that death penalty is the reasonable punishment, while others oppose it. In my opinion, putting capital punishment for violent crime into practise has not only advantages but also drawbacks.
On the one hand, death penalty is the most effective warning method for other criminal. Most of people afraid of death, therefore, criminals need to reconsider carefully before deciding to commit a sin, if not, they have to pay a high price for this. Applying this punishment may deter people from committing violent crime. Besides, it also helps prevent the possibility of continuing the crime after the offender have released from prison or probation. In 2018, the recidivism rate after special amnesty in Vietnam is 1.16%, so that capital punishment can lessen this number. Furthermore, for victim’s family, especially homicide victim, executing penalty creates a psychological balance for them. Revenge from those who bear serious suffer can be another violent crime, so death penalty is perhaps the most effective way in this situation.
On the other hand, the application of the death penalty can also create several disadvantages. Firstly, criminals can be a law unto themselves because every criminal have the same penalty even if the crime is serious or not. Based on the figure of Death Penalty Information Centre (DPIC), the murder rates in America increase in death penalty states, and is lower in where without capital punishment. The law is so strict that can cause fierce opposition. Then, death penalty is not fair for violent misdemeanour criminal. It can be the reason for social discontent because these criminals need to have an opportunity to improve their behaviour. Violent crimes is a wide definition, therefore, if a violent husband or bank robbers is decided to have this punishment, this situation can become unreasonable. Moreover, children can also be executed if the government applies this law for all delinquents. Some of them may be under the age of the person who has liability, so the government ought to reconsider when applying this law.
In conclusion, death penalty can brings benefits, and also can cause bad sides in several cases when punishing violent crimes. Personally, I believe that death penalty is the effective chastise in serious crimes. Therefore, finding the way how to define this kind of seriousness is difficult. I think that the government ought to consider carefully in the measure of seriousness in crime so that they can apply capital punishment in exact situation or crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24145785877 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80781809343 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50569476082 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3174090941 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2916666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70833333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 21.0 3.9879759519 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350014056563 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113475133762 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773483945386 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249046666621 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056387268934 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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