International sport competitions like Olympic Games and FIFA world cup are very spectacular for people in all over the world and athletes in different countries try to be involve in these games to show their abilities to their rivals and be victorious in these tournaments.
Most social experts believe that these competitions in addition to the sportive targets have some social and international values because they can gather people from different countries and cultures and it is a suitable communication way for athletes and their coaches to share their experiences and culture together. In addition these competitive sports have some financial benefits for host country because people from variety of countries come there to watch games and these audiences spend money during these time eagerly. Actually to achieving sport competition`s host there are some debates between countries sports authorities and it is very important for them because of financial and social advantages.
On the other hand, some sport experts think that athletes do hard exercises during preparation time before international championships and achieving medal is very important for them. In their opinion this importance can cause fights between athletes and make some problems for them during competitive sports. During these decades we had some evidence about some conflicts between athletes and even coaches in international sport tournaments.
In conclusion, watching international sport competition in stadiums and homes is enjoyable for majority of people and most sport contests have a significant role in building close relationships with other nations and communities. In my perspective ,nowadays, these games are fantastic for people but it is undeniable that excitement of these games can cause some unforeseen conflicts among athletes and this problem is unavoidable in many times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: addition,
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64436619718 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03103982818 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503521126761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0206434102 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.111111111 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323170801854 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160566661826 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323236148973 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213392647035 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492328368403 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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