Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that education is the most important part of our life. Education helps to develop good environment in the society. Some individuals are of the opinion that main aim of university education is help to providing jobs for students whereas other opine that there are more advantages of university education for the person as well as for community. It is necessary to look at both arguments before forming an opinion. In the following paragraph, I shall discuss about it.
Firstly and foremost, If you have aim in your life, you have to do hard work for achieving them. So, If university education aim to help providing better jobs for graduates, it is good thing and I think every university should have aim like this. For better jobs, everyone should have good knowledge and skills because in this competitive world without this you will not be able to get job easily and for achieving them university education played an important role. Everyone needs job to survive and for that, I think university education helps to get better jobs for graduates.
On the other hand, there are mammoth advantages of university education for individuals as well as for society. Education played a vital role of human development. Human development is as complex interplay of many factors. Today's society can be called a graying society. Education helps to improve person's perspective about family, about society. People think about their neighbors, they stand with him every time, in every situation. Helping others is a very virtuous thing. All of these things will come when people are educated.
In conclusion, I would like to say university education is important for getting better jobs as well as for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, well, whereas, as for, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73699054928 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7200102957 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403219965895 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125051273136 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971007281337 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266236462993 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577017974781 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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