In these days, more and more people are attending universities to secure a good job, while others are of an opinion that university is not only meant for education but also moulds the students for further benefit to the society. I agree with the latter notion and will discuss both sides of the argument.
Firstly, the universities are set up with the main aim of providing a secure job. The majority of people want to improve their future career prospects and attending universities is the best way as it helps in improving skills and gives expertise to the candidates on how to tackle a situation effectively. Education in universities is often expensive and most of the people would not prefer to attend if it does not provide them with a solution regarding the future.
Some people believe that university education is often beneficial to individuals as well as society. Firstly, the students leave their home and stay either in a dormitory or in a rented house for education which helps them in developing social skills. They also meet new friends which, in turn, boosts their confidence and their maturity. Secondly, society will gain from the contribution the graduates make to the economy. Moreover, we are living in a competitive world, so countries need educated people in order to prosper.
To conclude, I believe that the main purpose of the university is not only providing jobs but also to promote individuals for the betterment of society. If we continue to promote university education, it will lead to a better future for individuals as well as society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80845998551 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1718238443 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.583333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390174589201 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13268695028 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991446764981 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222927859017 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410118189995 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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