Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is suggested by some people that the only goal of the university is to prepare students to get a better job. Some people, on the other hand, believe that university studies offer a wider set of options for individuals and society which seems to be true.
A blinkered view claims that the only good usage of university is to help students find a better job and prosper in their career. It seems to be a common rule that having a university degree can boost individuals career, this, however, does not guarantee a good job all the time, in that it seems to be important to have a set of social skills. This view claims that people tend to join society when they go to school ,so they immerse themselves in society in younger ages. Having mentioned that, it is not necessary for them to undergo a bigger society like university in order to prepare for future. This seems to be wrong, in that unless people gain and practice social skills, they cannot be succeed in future.
The contrasting view believe that university’s job does not end in flourishing youths to get better job. It claims that university is a bigger opportunity for people to learn social skills and time management, even managing responsibilities is something that students practice in there. Provided a course that you took requires you to submit a project in the end of the semester, you need to manage your time and schedule your tasks in order to success in that project, for example. So without other types of skills that come with going to university it is hard for one to prosper in his career.
Taking all necessities of concentrating in university courses into account, it appears to be vital for students to practice their social skills, a set of skills that is needed for future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d to join society when they go to school ,so they immerse themselves in society in...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e social skills, they cannot be succeed in future. The contrasting view believe that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72025723473 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68229267919 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463022508039 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3022611784 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234413135874 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100729014633 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613280853479 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164225512239 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800910347527 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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