Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this world every body should learn essential thing and use these information in their life and their society. some people use their khowledge to reach to their goals and other ones use that to be one of the member of thier society and cominucate with others. in this topic will be talk about this issue and try to discuss about that.
As it is mentioned above, one groupe of people use thier information as instrument to improve themselve. this kind of groupe has different goal. some of them like to be a rich man, other one like to have political power, others like to be famouse by their knowledge, etc. they want education becuase of the personal reason.
on the other hand, second groupe believe that, they should learn essential information becuase they live in the society and with out these thing, they cant contact with others and be a succesful person in their soiciety. they think if they want to contact with others, they need information to discusse with them, or if they want to negutiate whit people, they need some information.
in conclusion, people need educate, because of any reason. some people have personal reason and others has general reason. its not importan and they should learn to improve our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...dy should learn essential thing and use these information in their life and their society. some p...
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Suggestion: Some
...mation in their life and their society. some people use their khowledge to reach to ...
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Suggestion: In
...ier society and cominucate with others. in this topic will be talk about this issu...
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Suggestion: This
...ion as instrument to improve themselve. this kind of groupe has different goal. some...
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Suggestion: Some
...this kind of groupe has different goal. some of them like to be a rich man, other on...
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Suggestion: On
...tion becuase of the personal reason. on the other hand, second groupe believe t...
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...on becuase they live in the society and with out these thing, they cant contact with oth...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...e they live in the society and with out these thing, they cant contact with others and be a...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... society and with out these thing, they cant contact with others and be a succesful ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e a succesful person in their soiciety. they think if they want to contact with othe...
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Suggestion: In
... people, they need some information. in conclusion, people need educate, becaus...
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Suggestion: Some
...le need educate, because of any reason. some people have personal reason and others ...
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Suggestion: Its
...l reason and others has general reason. its not importan and they should learn to i...
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Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...l reason and others has general reason. its not importan and they should learn to i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80841121495 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34607828643 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.224608397 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944063117448 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401248357028 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02406747601 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638359789652 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149453835719 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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