Ielts writing task 2 some experts belive that it is better for children to begin learning a forign language in primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outwiegh the disadvantages.
recent years learning different language is an important issue in the world. By improving technology, comunication between people increased, so they need to learn their language. Some scientist believe that the best time for learning forign language is childhood. In my opinion all parents should advice to their children to learn at least one foreign language.
As mentioned above learnign at least one language is important for all people because our new world. we cant isolate ourself in our country and if we want to be successful, we should comunicate with other people in other country. Hence, the best time to learn other language is childhood. because their mind is fresh and learn faster than old people. therefore its better to teach them in the begining of their life and train them more language. I believe the first language which they should learn is English language. the next one is chines and after that germany and france. The reason of that is their countries economy.
On the other hand when you are old your mind is not fresh and you can't learn faster than before. Besides of that you are so bussy and you can't spend enough time to study other language. also your mind is bussy and you can't concentrate on thing that you want. but its possible to learn in old age.
In conclusion, its better to learn other language when you are a child, but its not the only way. every body can learn foreign language in each time they want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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recent years learning different language is an...
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...to learn their language. Some scientist believe that the best time for learning forign ...
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...dhood. In my opinion all parents should advice to their children to learn at least one...
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...or all people because our new world. we cant isolate ourself in our country and if w...
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...fresh and learn faster than old people. therefore its better to teach them in the beginin...
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... they should learn is English language. the next one is chines and after that germa...
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...esides of that you are so bussy and you cant spend enough time to study other langua...
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...nd enough time to study other language. also your mind is bussy and you cant concent...
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...nd enough time to study other language. also your mind is bussy and you cant concent...
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...nguage. also your mind is bussy and you cant concentrate on thing that you want. but...
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... are a child, but its not the only way. every body can learn foreign language in each...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72440944882 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32988387194 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492125984252 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5007544455 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137899372884 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052040688748 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451458078859 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959351297333 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410968284929 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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