Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Air travels, for instance helicopter and air plane, are thought to have had a detrimental effect on our earth environment. However, while some of the people believe that travel air emit a pollution for air environment, I stand for otherwise air travel conducts a bad impact on our environment, but air travel is one the most important public transportation in the world and then, restricting them means cutting off the human travel activity .
With regards to the pollution which is been the main cause of the air travel, firstly, the air travel engine emits heat, noise particulates and gases . These components have a big responsible for the climate change and moreover stimulate the earth’s temperature to be more heat as the day goes by. Secondly, the rapid of air travel in the past years contributes to an increases of air pollution which containing some toxic and these toxics will soon threat the organism’s life sustainability.
However, the air travel has given the big change on the human transport history. Long days, before the air travel technology had found, people had to travel the long distance destination in ineffective way and time and even after , The air engineer had started developing a new ways of a long distance journey, such as air balloon transportation, but unfortunately this transportation threated the safety of the passengers . The modern air travels had simplified the time requirement by their advantage of overcoming obstacles in their route of journey. And moreover, their speed which have the higher velocity rather than usual transportations . . It is really suitable for the things which need a quick service such as, carrying goods in short period of time of delivery.
To conclude, Even in some cases air travel emits a dangerous pollution for our environment , The air travel plays the primary role in the human transportation activity especially to whom needs traveling in fast and effective way. Therefore, The most appropriate ways is developing the new air travel which emitting a less pollution for our environment otherwise restricting the air travel in our transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in short, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21865889213 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10072539242 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5999638131 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.166666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225464589575 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931429213677 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652274108265 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159431246198 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428719294853 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.