Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Air travels, for instance, helicopter and airplane, are thought to have had a detrimental effect on our earth environment. However, while some of the people believe that travel air emits pollution for air environment, I stand for otherwise, air travel conducts a bad impact on our environment, but air travel is one the most important public transportation in the world and then, restricting them means cutting off the human travel activity.
With regards to the pollution which is been the main cause of air travel, firstly, the air travel engine emits heat, noise particulates and gases. These components have a big responsibility for climate change and moreover stimulate the earth’s temperature to be more heat as the day goes by. Secondly, the rapid of air travel in the past years contributes to an increase in air pollution which containing some toxic and these toxics will soon threaten the organism’s life sustainability.
However, air travel has given a big change in human transport history. Long days, before the air travel technology had found, people had to travel the long distance destination in an ineffective way and time and even after, The air engineer had started developing a new ways of a long distance journey, such as air balloon transportation, but unfortunately this transportation threated the safety of the passengers . The modern air travels had simplified the time requirement by their advantage of overcoming obstacles in their route of the journey. And moreover, their speed which has a higher velocity rather than usual transportations. It is really suitable for the things which need a quick service such as, carrying goods in a short period of time of delivery.
To conclude, Even in some cases air travel emits dangerous pollution for our environment, The air travel plays the primary role in the human transportation activity especially to who needs traveling in a fast and effective way. Therefore, The most appropriate ways are developing the new air travel which emitting less pollution for our environment otherwise restricting the air travel in our transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25958702065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15130966348 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5304987242 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.583333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225806675051 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909583010511 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668695158781 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158884650312 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411532315193 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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