Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is a belief that parents should permit children to make their own decisions. Some argue that this teaching method will create a greedy and self-centric generation, while others believe that its pros have far outweighed its cons. From my point of view, I agree with the latter statement that many imperative values caused by letting teenagers determine their lives.
On the one hand, many detrimental impacts can occur from early self-decision that should be strictly considered. One of those effects is wrong thoughts among youngsters in the long run. That is because as the young have not had sufficient awareness about the surrounding world, they are thus likely to gain erroneous perception when making their own decisions. For example, children who have a great admire for superhero movies might perceive that violence is the proper way to solve out an issue. In addition, as youngsters always select activities themselves, solitude would rise. Because they will be over self-centric and will tend to rebuff advice from others, they then would become socially isolated. Furthermore, there are various cases that adults cannot control their child's behaviours because of the mentioned problem. In other words, too much of something is never means to be good.
On the other hand, apart from the above drawbacks, advantages from early self-decision are worthy. By choosing what to do themselves, teenagers would be more independence and confidence. Deciding what foods and clothes to buy, for instance, could support them to become decisive compared to those who do not. Moreover, as pupil practice opting reactions daily, they would be able to acquire numerous opportunities in future careers. It is because they tend to be more sensitive towards profitable deals and be able to make quick movements which is the most important skill in today's fast-paced world. As a consequence, these youngsters will hold a higher chance of being successful in their lives.
To conclude, even though allowing too many self-made decisions in early life can be harmful, there are tremendously positive outcomes generated from having rights to decide in decent aspects in the former age.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29226361032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72880781034 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630372492837 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.701498607 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.611111111 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138523465713 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419285430478 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503884110878 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833611932161 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524410506041 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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