Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that, it is important to let children to pick whatever they like or choose on everyday basis, for example, what would they like to eat, choosing their clothes and which games or entertainment they prefer. This will effect in community of singularities who only think about their own choice. Other people argues that, it is significant for offspring to just make their own decision about things that effect in their life. This essay will demonstrate both viewpoints, also it will show my opinion regarding this topic.
On one hand, letting offspring do what their like, will create an independency to their character once they become young. When the child has his own decision to determine his food or clothes, that will make him feel responsibility of his choice and will be a good thinker. For instance, one research applied for some children they divided them to two groups, one group to pick whatever they choose and the other they select for them, and the researchers were observing both of them. The results came with a huge difference between these groups for many aspects. Secondly, when the child used to select by his or her own, that will create a future successful person and a good decision maker. I completely agree to let our children to choose and make their own decisions.
On the other hand, some families think that by choosing to their children, they are protecting them from doing any mistakes, however it will effect negatively on their child. For example, many people cannot take any further step without asking their friends of family, because he used to be dependent person.
In conclusion, both viewpoints have merits, whether families can let their offspring choose and take their own decision or they will allow them to choose only the issues that affect in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...or entertainment they prefer. This will effect in community of singularities who only ...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...rom doing any mistakes, however it will effect negatively on their child. For example,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512987013 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45729249153 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4204410023 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292013117265 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121066788587 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819584809889 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197858396237 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652859461365 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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