Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes, other people believe that It is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about whether should children become independent in choosing things related to their life. Although it is true that allowing children to make those choices is necessary for their development, I shall say that parents should cooperate with their children in order to find the best choice or risk of nurturing uncaring human beings.
It can be argued that permitting children to make choices pertaining to their daily matters such as food, clothing or entertainment is beneficial in different ways. Firstly, it will give them a sense of freedom, where they are freed from the constraints of their parents in life. Secondly, it would cultivate their way of thinking, becoming more independent on their parents, being able to decide things on their own without much help. This is vital to their later life since one day they will have to make decisions by themselves about their life.
However, there should be limits on this allowance, parents, and children should work together for a better choice. Yet, it is true that children are not old enough to decide what is good for them, and they might not think thoroughly about their decisions. For example, when given the freedom to choose their favorite clothes, children would choose fashionable and costly ones, in which they may not care about their parents’ budget. Without a doubt, if interventions are made, as time passes they will grow up to selfish individuals, thinking only about themselves. Therefore, restrictions are needed along with the cooperation of parents for the best things.
In conclusion, albeit allowing children to make choices about their own life is needed, it should be confined to some extent and the involvement of parents for the best choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64592796911 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9354879541 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296469935644 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116191314227 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717213044856 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201388609687 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464513187777 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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