Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wish. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is often argued that parents should let their children follow the opinion of themselves to make a decision on daily life, whereas someone reckon that influencing children’s decisions is the appropriate behavior. this essay will discuss both views and express my own thinking.
To begin with, restricting children’s freedom to make a decision is comprehensive. When children are still a baby, who do not hold a sense yet. All the things are decided by parents, such as entertainment or eating habit. At the moment, adults are necessary to control their kids as it can conclude the health growth is happened on the kids and this is the responsibility to take care children. Therefore, parents are responsible to control the decisions before their kids become a primary school pupil.
However, the importance of allowing children to follow their aim cannot be ignored. since parent’s opinion may not appropriate or even wrong for the interest of children, adults should concern to release the authority for kids to decide their own choices. For instance, every pupil is compulsory to learn an elective subject in secondary school, because parents may not know the aiming prospect of children, who should be allowed to choose an individual decision as well as create the dream prospection for themselves. As a result, I strongly think that children are available to make the own choice after they become a teenager.
In conclusion, since it is practical to decide the treatment for children according to the ages, affecting the decision of children should be used on baby era as well as demolished after kids are mature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20224719101 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94050188937 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4433597345 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189771356178 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778959759647 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043363796363 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1100515865 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519272061729 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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