With the development in transportation the number of vehicles on road have also increased. But, some individuals consider that cycling is still best mode of transportation.whereas, others think there are numerous drawbacks of cycling. Here, i shall scrutinise both side of this assertion in upcoming crumbs.
Admittedly, riding a cycle have multifarious merits. First and foremost, it is environment friendly and causes no pollution, thus it can be helpful in reducing carbon content in air, making natural surroundings healthy. Even, it can lower the energy usage, saving non-renewable sources for future generation. Moreover, it has several health benefits, as youth is turning obese, this issue can be resolved by cycling for few minutes. It keeps pupils active and full of zeal that can aid them to learn effectively. It decrease chances of distinctive ailments such as incease in cholesterol level, joint pain and other problems in such a young age. Hence, cycling is boon for nature and people living in it
On the other side, cycling can also be disasteres in some cases. Firstly, one needs to be extremely fit, as it requires lot of mechanical force to drive it. Besides this, nowadays destinations are far away, so all of the energy will be drained before reaching the final place. To illustrate, according to a research, students who go to school by cycle seem's to be tired and lethargic in school time. Additionally, cycling is not safe due to elevation in number of vehicles on road and people are in hurry to be on time. Dudecing, because of neglence of local bodies now it is dangerous to cycle on road.
In conclusion, cycling can be advantageous for health, environment and be the cheapest but its negative points negate positive ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'still the best'.
Suggestion: still the best
...me individuals consider that cycling is still best mode of transportation.whereas, others ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re numerous drawbacks of cycling. Here, i shall scrutinise both side of this asse...
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...t can aid them to learn effectively. It decrease chances of distinctive ailments such as...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... nowadays destinations are far away, so all of the energy will be drained before reaching ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09310344828 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03128554137 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2294265253 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.068305889635 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254090923318 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301991692883 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437643780743 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340853664067 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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