Some people believe that children should make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who think about their own wishes. Others people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
People are of diverse opinion on
whether youngsters should make their own decision. While some are of the view that giving children freehand in making choices will probably lead to the creation of a society where people care about themselves only, others disagree and think it is highly quintessential for them to make decisions on situation that involves them. In my opinion, I believe children’s liberty in making personal choices will make them to be more independent
Some people believe that society will be full of individuals with only self interest if youngsters are giving freedom to make own selection about choices available to them because children at the early only think about what benefit them rather than considering others and if this is allowed to continue till adult life, they might make decisions that are of self benefit thereby leading to deterioration of the society. For instance, a child that is given freedom to select which cloth to wear may choose the one that is contrary to the norms of the society and if this persists, He or She may turn out in adult life to wear clothes that pleases them without regard to the rules and regulations guiding the society. Thus, this will have a negative impact on the society as a whole.
On the flip side, some certain individuals believe that it is crucial for children to make decision on issues of concern to them and I agree as it makes them to more independent. In other words, youngsters will be less reliant on other people when making choices especially in adulthood. In fact, it will enable them to make tough decision when face with challenges where it is difficult to select among the options available. For example, children will be able to carry out activities with less consultation from parents on issues such as marital life or money saving skills most importantly in later life. Therefore, the society will be full of individuals with independent minds
In conclusion, this essay discussed whether youngsters should make their own choices or they should be restricted. While people are of varied opinion, I think children should be giving the mandate to make decisions because it will make them to more independent as they develop into adulthood
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94429708223 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61910518151 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464190981432 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.22127684 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.454545455 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2727272727 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314241837842 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135606660981 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794107541011 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196649243901 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634930919993 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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