Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
We are now living in a fast-paced world where more and more opportunities are opening. Some certain demographic of a society are of the opinion that we have more than enough choices. I completely agree with this view because technology has created more opportunities from which people can make their choices.
To begin, improvement in technology has greatly affected all facet of life. It has impact on every sector or profession which has lead to creation of more from which people can select. For instance, in medical profession, there were few specialties in the past but today, with help of technology, there are more specialties which give the professionals in the field abundance of choices to choose which specialty to follow. Consequently, this does not only enable these professional to have full satisfaction, it has immensely improve the health of the population and also bring about solution to health problems that cannot be cured in the past. Clearly, technology has greatly contributed to creation of more avenues to make many choices.
Admittedly, there are certain populations who have limited choices. This can be attributed to their inability to be relevant in this current world. In most cases it is due to lack of education or technical skill. If people are deprived of these, they will not be able to have enough choices that technology has provided. However, this is not common as it was in the past since the world is now a global village. Taking Africa continent as an example, the rate of illiteracy in the past was high but with technological improvement and growth inclusivity, this gap has been bridged today; therefore people from this continent now have more choices like their counterpart from the western society
In conclusion, this essay argued why we have abundance choices in today’s world. From my own perspective, even though some societies might have some setbacks in making choices, I totally believe that people nowadays have greater number of choices because of involvement of technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13213213213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84690703298 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7467354173 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234747298335 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743886556726 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622766117901 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162486392849 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07200117314 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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