Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
In what ways are computers a hindrance?
What is your opinion?
There is no denying that computer revolution has positively affected people’s life on a massive scale. Nonetheless, it has been argued that whether computers are more a hindrance rather than a support. In my point of view, I totally agree with this motion.
At the outset, computer is undeniably a contributing factor which makes people become more and more passive and gradually losing some of their innate abilities. The overuse of computers with the aim of looking for information or a solution for a problem is the main cause of the loss in people’s problem-solving skill on their own or their creativity. Individuals tend to depend so much on this smart device that they find it unfeasible to devise a new idea or figure out their problems without a computer. As a result, there has been an upsurge in the number of people who are out of work owing to be replaced by computers.
Apart from that, it has been apparently proved that computers can lead to a considerable rise in people’s mental and physical health problem. Initially, that people choose to sit in front of the screen at terminals in preference to engage in some outdoor activities has been linked with repetitive strain injury, headache, eyestrain, etc especially in youngsters. Furthermore, according to telegraph.co.uk, spending just five hours a day on computer can hugely intensify the risk of suffering from depression and insomnia. Therefore, this can cause a respectable reduction in life expectancy as well as exert a negative impact on the development of the countries.
Last but not least, computers are an element causing a significant increase in crimes. Computers have made it much more likely for children and adolescents to access to inappropriate websites which involves violence, sexual abuse or crime. As a consequence, in all probability, they will emulate these unacceptable behaviors, which will result in a rise in juvenile delinquency.
To encapsulate, I wholeheartedly believe that the drawbacks of computers outweigh its benefits
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25609756098 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20504272278 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6919923033 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193829350929 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618638123744 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431256513841 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104563969192 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309967409291 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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