Some people believe that the continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Nowadays, as the world's population continues to grow, some problems have shown up. More and more people are paying attention to the factors that cause this phenomenon and the impacts. From my aspect, the following reasons should be considered.
First of all, the increasingly advanced medical level is the most significant factor. With the development of science and the modern medical equipment advanced, many diseases that may cause death in the past have found an effective means of treatment. According to some relevant research, the number of newborns per year is far greater than the number of death.,which makes the population rise.
While the level of economic development is another important factor. As living condition improved, people are increasingly focused on the nutrition of daily diets, which reduce the rate of death. Furthermore, a stable financial situation makes more families willing to bring up more children, which also impact on the global population.
However, there is no doubt that the continuing growth of population is the biggest problem that human being is facing, which will cause many negative effects without efficient control. One of the effects is that it may lead to serious aging problems. In addition, the stress of using various materials and resources around the world will be increased naturally.
In short, the issue of global population growth cannot be ignored. Therefore, both individuals and governments need to raise awareness and take certain measures to deal with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...is far greater than the number of death.,which makes the population rise. While the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...th.,which makes the population rise. While the level of economic development is an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in short, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74312271366 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.184567884 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152631136248 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461808701509 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674374355993 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078318777191 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062908436278 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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