The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
The increasing number in the habitants that live on our planet presents culprit for our civilization nowadays. Some of the main causes, for the increase in figures that we are witnessing, are increased life span of humans, industrialization, technology and increased self-awareness. In my opinion, the increasing number itself is not a problem, but our human actions are those that harm us, our environment and the future generations.
Firstly, we have the most advanced civilization ever and our accomplishment throughout a history bring us to the place where we are now. As a result of scientific achievements doctors today cure more diseases than ever before. Furthermore, different varieties of a vitamin supplements are easy reachable for the consumption, and people are improving their health conditions. Moreover, technology improvements make our life better and easy-going, and the machines overtook hard intensive job positions and have extricated humans. In addition to all of this, our self-awareness has increased and we become more consciousness about reproduction and we aim to raise as more children as possible. All of these factors lead to an increase in number of today population.
On the other hand, I disagree that increasing population is the biggest problem to the world and humans. In fact the reason for all problems lies within our behaviour. Humans don’t use natural resources properly, and it leads to the big changes such as climate changes, erosion, artificially grown food and a lot of other factors that will downgrade us and our future generations.
In my opinion, to make sure that life on this planet doesn’t become endangered we need to think and act consciously. Despite number of the humans is increasing, that is not the reason for which we can say that number is harmful. The only way is to think globally, and for each move we make to think about effects it can cause. We should only make actions that will make positive effects. There is enough place on this planet for everybody, because huge areas of land are inhabited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... culprit for our civilization nowadays. Some of the main causes, for the increase in figure...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bring us to the place where we are now. As a result of scientific achievements doc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17159763314 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08185767258 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1723527353 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0751143512507 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285758355695 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361058063107 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556298662051 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413075906266 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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