Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Many people differ on the idea that artificial intelligence advancement is predicted to either improve or have a negative influence on our lives in the future. There are good arguments for both aspects, but I believe the former is most likely to occur.
Artificial intelligence might indeed have some unfavourable impacts in the short term. First, the rise of the machines is taking jobs away from people. For example, robotic arms have replaced many workers in Amazon storage management. This type of work requires the precision and relentless working hours, which is better done by a machine than a human. This is also true in the case of data processing, due to the ability of machines to perform calculations faster than any human beings. These machine learning technologies are gradually replacing individuals. Computers might be faster and more precise than people but they cannot surpass human in areas such as arts, ethics, and cultural studies. So in the long term, the labour market will be reconstructed and these effects are likely to be minimized.
Notwithstanding the transient drawbacks, futuristic society will witness a range of miraculous improvements coming from artificial intelligence technology. The most prominent justification is that people are going to be released from the burden of manual labour. Industries such as food, power, clothes are anticipated to be operated by machines and they only require minimal supervision of the human. In addition, the artificial intelligence also plays a pivotal role in developing cutting-edge technologies like genetic engineering or nanotechnology. These technologies might lead to further growth in different fields and further enhance the quality of our lives.
In conclusion, the advancement of artificial intelligence appears to be worrisome because of the impacts on the workforce in the near future. In my opinion, this technology will ultimately bring about a better era of prosperity than this world has ever seen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41479099678 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07656725501 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5785507683 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283195807849 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787129665908 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724459795668 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173274724357 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362379182045 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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