Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed ( damaged ) by human activity . Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live . What is your opinion ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
Since the appearance of humans on the earth, they have changed their environment to survive and live in a higher life standards. While some people believe that human activities make globe a better habitat, the others opine that the earth has been invaded and destroyed by people. In my opinion, the earth has been irreversibly damaged by people.
On the one hand, building new big cities with concrete and muds brings about a huge environmental problem namely desertification. In other words, urbanisation created many deserts all around the world where people live in. For example, Istanbul, in which more than sixteen million habitants live, is one of the barren and largest city of the globe. Some satellite photos has proved that it has become more arid as a result of uncontrolled urbanisation and cut down of forests. Hence, one of the basic activities of human, building a shelter for a living demolish forests and leads to increase in the amount of bare areas in the world.
Besides, human activities such as driving, farming and building plants boom the greenhouse effect. To put simply, from breathing to emission of gas fumes creates carbon dioxide which in turns raises the globe temperatures and eventually global warming. For instance, according to a report in Financial Times, the source of greenhouse gases released from human activities has doubled in the past two decades in all over the world. Thus, human activities has a harmful effect for the nature.
In conclusion, in spite of that human being struggle to make earth better place for survival, some people claim that it hurts natural treasury. In my point of view, people destroy their planet while thinking that they are doing best for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06993006993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63644710595 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2468350496 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316025294629 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10809187762 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095561900552 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191984760002 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903989246969 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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