Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Recently, an entertainment show and art have been developing rapidly. It can affect to positive the society and it helps to become open-minded for children and adults. Some people think that entertainers are more important than scientists. But, Those are not the same things.
Entertainment which can relief stress from social took and every day’s life. So, entertainer who gives motivation from behind screen. If we did not have tv shows, the human mind would not have fun things and happiness. My country’s channels has been making show of many kind in last few years. For example, Mongolian talents, and the voice are achievement copyright. Those show give a chance to many people.
But being scientist is a huge contrivance of mind. If government encourage sector of science, this country would develop faster. So many research of mining, agriculture, and health does scientists. Their done works which benefit many kind for society and human.
Therefore, without comparing this sector, both are important that need to be understood. In my opinion, scientist need to work to at workplace that like movie shows laboratory and none do not disallow entertainers, so they need to do that hoped all things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
..., this country would develop faster. So many research of mining, agriculture, and health does...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24873096447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84820883015 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690355329949 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8513837406 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.625 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130611718735 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457171410981 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978100007538 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795180599575 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625757166436 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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