Some people believe in the era of e-technology, printing newspapers and magazines will cease to occur in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, most countries have shown great concern about newspapers and magazines. Controversy exists as to due to the emergence of modern technologies whether printing newspapers and magazines will be stopped in the future. From my perspective, I remain unconvinced that this type of media will disappear in the future.
To begin with, the most frequent factor contributing to this view is that newspapers are a reliable resource, which provides people with exact information. This is shown by the following example. In Vietnam, the contents of a newspaper are always inspected seriously by many organizations prior to being printed out. Besides, there are also many rigorous laws issued by the government to ensure the precise news being printed. Meanwhile, the resources of information on other media are not controlled in a strict way. Therefore, in this case, newspapers and magazines are better than other modern technologies.
In addition, one explanation to support this view is that people in some particular areas cannot connect the Internet to gain news through technologies. In fact, in Eritrea, Internet access is all government-controlled and less than 1% of the total population reportedly go online. All non-government controlled media is banned, independent news websites have been long since shut down. As a result, people in this area still need newspapers, as well as magazines, to update news. For this reason, printing newspapers and magazines are not stopped in this day and age.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that despite the popularity of modern technologies, newspapers and magazines are still necessary to some extent, especially accurate information and its approach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48880597015 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1950998173 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1040776504 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159728775589 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522551701133 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516265828486 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104485686749 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264242273842 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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