.Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions usually vary regarding whether or not free tertiary education should be given to all students. While the act of providing free-of-charge learning is somewhat beneficial, its impacts on the economy and society can be profound.
There are many valid reasons why governments should implement free-university policy. One of them is that all students, especially the underprivileged, would be entitled to universities without putting more pressure on their parents' budget. This means they will have more chances to get a well-paid job and enhance their prospects. Furthermore, society can greatly benefit from an improved quality of human capital. It can be said that a well-educated workforce is the greatest stimulus to the economy.
Despite the merits mentioned above, the provision of free access to college, in my opinion, can cause several setbacks. As the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, university degrees no longer ensure job seekers a lucrative career. Therefore, if there were too many graduates, it would lead to a considerable number of unemployed bachelor's degree holders. Also, since the government has to make enormous investments in education, they have to increase taxes and reduce welfare among others to compensate for the loss of money. The people, therefore, have to bear a heavier financial burden stemming from increased tax, and this could provoke outrage and even protest among citizens.
In summary, while giving free access to tertiary education is a humanitarian act, its effects on society should not be underestimated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
Opinions usually vary regarding whether or not free tertiary education should be given...
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...trage and even protest among citizens. In summary, while giving free access to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53719008264 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08983717658 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677685950413 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9189443859 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193583006141 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624918219318 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439520998739 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10930216675 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183099924615 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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