Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that companies should be encouraged to fire senior employees who are aged 55 and above due to give work opportunities to young people. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because of benefits it brings to both the new generation and companies. Firstly, this essay will discuss the problem of high youth unemployment and secondly, discuss how business benefits when employers hire millennials.
The high rate of youth unemployment hampers economical and social growth of young people and negatively impacts on their health and well-being lives. This leads to young people lose their opportunities to have productive and rewarding lives which they would have had if they had got positions of old one's. The fact of significant youth unemployment was revealed by recent survey which showed that more than 70 million young people are unemployed and 262 million youth are not in employment, education or training across developing countries.
Companies, from the other hand, have benefits of hiring young people such as new energy and perspective brought by inexperienced but cheap young workers. Thus, for less amount of money young employees can bring fresh perspective and a different way of thinking to business and this is great for companies' productivity and prosperity. The policy of small business is a prime example of hiring young people. The Forbes published stories of success of small business employers during work with younger employees.
In conclusion, people on the new generation should be in priority of workforce due to reduce youth unemployment rate and the benefits young people bring to business.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85023356253 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9745786988 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173796514982 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683619607942 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701868735266 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117589267234 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638218773072 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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