Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, traffic jams are becoming one of the most serious problems in many countries. To reduce this, while it is believed that expanding and constructing more roads is the best solution, I agree with people who argue that the authorities should use the money for building train and subway systems.
On the one hand, there are some reasons to think that building more and wider roads can diminish traffic congestion. The first reason is that the road system is inadequate to cope with more and more vehicles. The more people travel to work by their own cars, the more roads need to be constructed to meet ones’ growing demand. The second reason is that cities are expanding and citizens have to commute further to work so there are more traffic jams. Therefore new and wider roads are necessary to help people get to their destination more easily.
On the other hand, I believe that building rail and subway networks is a more effective way to reduce traffic congestion. For example, when there are undergrounds and trains for people to travel to their destination, citizens are no need to drive to work; therefore, the traffic congestion can be considerably alleviated, and people can commute more quickly than by car. Besides, this solution is more practical since there is not enough space available to build new or widen roads in cities. Besides, building metro systems is proved to be very useful in many countries across the globe such as China, the USA, the UK, and so on.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that the better way to reduce traffic congestion for the government is to invest in constructing train and underground railway systems than in building more and wider roads.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89864864865 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56443621286 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.74406479 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419610676363 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154872108214 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108455433425 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270823807598 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551527714973 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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