Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone.
What do you think about this?
Taxing the people is a topic for debate. Several adults believe that the Government should levy huge taxes on general public in order to provide best facilities to all citizens in need. I my opinion, this proposition is imperative for making this society equally beneficial to all human beings.
Increasing the tax rate can benefit the country in numerous ways. Firstly, this additional funding would help the regulating authorities to provide better Health Care facilities to poor community. In development countries like India, good medical facilities are available only to wealthy people and people who cant afford these expenses are not given proper financial assistance. To Illustrate, as per a research conducted by WHO, approximately 25% of Cancer patients have died in India without monetary backup. Therefore, excessive income to the governing body could facilitate provision of free medical facilities to all living in the country. For the above mentioned reason elevating the tax amount from public is indispensable.
Apart from providing good Health Care system, inflated income could also pave way to free education for all. In poor nations, parents do not send their offspring to schools and colleges due to their in-affordability. For Instance, as per a latest survey 90% of children in economically backward countries are not exposed to basic education also. However, increased funds to government could serve as a bridge in providing free education for all younger generation in the country. This advancement will definitely produce a better economy in future.
To recapitulate,through high revenue, the dream of free education and health care could come true for many surviving in poor and developing countries. From my point of view, taxes are to be increased to serve the poor in a better way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...he Government should levy huge taxes on general public in order to provide best facilities to ...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...uge taxes on general public in order to provide best facilities to all citizens in need. I m...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e only to wealthy people and people who cant afford these expenses are not given pro...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...ustrate, as per a research conducted by WHO, approximately 25% of Cancer patients h...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... in-affordability. For Instance, as per a latest survey 90% of children in econom...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ries are not exposed to basic education also. However, increased funds to government...
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Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ill definitely produce a better economy in future. To recapitulate,through high revenu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , through
...er economy in future. To recapitulate,through high revenue, the dream of free educati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35191637631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99325647241 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.484536685 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221250824082 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722319419976 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490470005418 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137591656145 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605366724236 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.