Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It was believed by some people that raising tax on many industries will tackle the problem of pollution whilst others reckon that there are more effective alternatives to tax raising. Considering the reasons of each side, it may be best, in my opinion, to combine a variety of methods rather than depend solely on one way.
Those agreeing to put an increase on tax believe that the movement will force many companies and corporations to reconsider their current production procedures. Consequently, they will be expected to pick up a more environmentally-friendly tactic in order to survive in the business world. On the other hand, it is also true that besides raising taxes, other alternatives can also be implemented to deal with pollution. Governments and organizations can, for example, initiate a project encouraging people to use public transport more often, or to trade ole and unused things such as cans, bottles, or clothes for money and other minor privileges.
As both sides have their own plausible explanation to stand their ground, the most practical approach, it seems, is to combine the best of each party together. Surely, redirecting production activities of significant and influential industries with the view of protecting the environment is likely to produce the desired results in a short amount of time. However, when it comes to long-term effects, it would be foolish to underestimate the power of each and every individual of a country. As a matter of fact, it should be clear to any leaders that once a policy gains adequate belief and co-operation from the citizens, its success is completely within reach. Therefore, efforts to involve every citizen in, for instance, educational and advertising programmes, should be put under consideration.
In conclusion, instead of relying solely on one way such as raising taxes to deal with pollution, the far more effective movement, in my view, is to implement various alternatives simultaneously with the attempt to involve every party and every individual in our society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26443768997 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17021130886 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2100402748 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215343662581 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691788002044 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874340638164 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135608800813 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898849542689 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26443768997 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17021130886 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2100402748 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215343662581 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691788002044 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874340638164 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135608800813 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898849542689 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.