Some people believe that it is bad to accept a situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is indisputable to say that life will not always remain stable, and facing different circumstances along people’s paths is obvious. Some people assert suffering arduous situations such as running out of money, having tragedies whilst others advocate turning the tide for themselves.
Firstly, we can not deny that sometimes people have their backs against the wall that they can not get out of them. At these moments, it is understandable to see people reluctantly suffering or having no attempts to better the bad situations. The reason why people do that is that they have no choice but to accept, they can not think of better solutions to resolve their problems. Simultaneously, lacking motivation can be taken into consideration as the pivotal reason why people choose to accept life’s difficulties.
On the other hand, many people prefer to stand up and looking for their moments to escape bad situations. Accounting for their preferences, there are two granted reasons. First, however serious the problems are, many people can not neglect the situations to be worsened and come to a dead end. We can see a typical example of that is Joe Biden, who came over his family tragedy to be the President of a Nation. Moreover, the mental spirit is also the main key to get rid of negative circumstances because anyway people will fall into stalemate if there is no effort so why not give a try to change the situations.
In conclusion, it is definitely a wise choice for people to improve themselves rather than accepting irritating difficulties. Provided that people try, there is probably always light at the end of the tunnel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85319541327 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8639860888 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180291965436 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613900221363 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515037702884 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108930628805 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326264566308 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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