Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Determination has always been among the valuable qualities of successful individuals, and those who achieve remarkable success are constantly striving for a better future and improving their situation regardless of any difficulties. There are undoubtedly many advocates of this characteristic, while some people argue that it would be better to let things happen the way they are. This essay will look into both sides of the argument and outline why I side with the former view.
To begin with, it is widely believed that life is a series of challenges set on your way, and overcoming them is the only way to make it more meaningful and happy. What I mean by this is that trying not to be discouraged by harsh circumstances and heading forward gives our lives a precious purpose, and we tend to feel that we actually live to fulfill it rather than exist meaninglessly. Furthermore, a strong will against bad situations acts as a precursor towards success, and only when the challenges have been conquered can you realize the satisfaction of fruition. Take students for example, students trying to do their best in their tests and exams have a tendency to become outstanding people in the future, while those who choose to indulge themselves and keep complaining about their pressure are overwhelmed by any hardness they may face.
On the other hand, some people hold the view that a better approach is to simply accept things that happen. It is their belief that everything is predestined to follow a particular path, and we should not waste any efforts trying to change it. This is true to a certain extent, as many unfortunate people still suffer from many problems such as poverty or starvation despite being highly determined to become better.
To sum up, I strongly believe that fighting for our own life is definitely the way we should live, and trying to improve our situation no matter what it takes will surely bring some positive results, even in the smallest things. Each of us should maintain our little spark to find meaningful values in this stressful life and believe in a better scenario waiting ahead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, i mean, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92757660167 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7474869327 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601671309192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8934988654 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.416666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221450617951 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725054849932 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04509688335 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125808231333 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243200860933 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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