Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In everyone’s life, they have to meet a lot of difficulties before successes, and they have different ways to face these situations. It is a common belief that the best thing people can do is to accept terrible situations from work or finance. However, there is a more persuasive argument that people should try and improve such circumstances.
On the one hand, accepting bad situations is considered to be a safe choice. The younger think that they can not do anything so they agree and compromise. It is due to the fear of making the situation worse and the lack of confidence in themselves. For instance, a normal person, when he has trouble, tends to wait for help from his family or friends instead of doing something. He wants to become a billionaire, but he gets a job with a low salary and he has compromised. And till the end of his life, he has not been as a rich man as he wants.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that people should do their best to move up in life. When adults try to make a bad situation better, they may fail. And then they search more and more, they have finally managed to find the best solution. That is the way successful people do. As a case in point, Thomas Edison, a famous scientist, had done the same. Before inventing the light bulb successfully, he had conducted thousands of experiments and fallen. He never gave up and always learned more knowledge. His persistence finally helped him succeed in inventing the first light bulb, which is used widely all over the world. Furthermore, trying and improving bad situations also help people discover many spontaneous abilities and valuable experiences.
In sum, while it is apparent that accepting terrible circumstances is one way to face too, it is undeniable that finding a way to improve such circumstances is more intelligent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...idered to be a safe choice. The younger think that they can not do anything so they a...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, a normal person, when he has trouble, tends to wait for help from his family o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87807325212 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0551809547 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4210526316 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181608286654 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581064267503 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640374642121 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113775490727 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434344489641 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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