Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Human’s life is like theatre scenery. It has good and bad scenes. However, some believe they need to accept bad scenes as they are part of the scripts, in contrast, some believe they can make a happy ending. In my opinion, there is always a path to go through in order to make a better future.
Many people believe in fate and they trust destiny to decide instead of them. Therefore, they don't desire to give the effort to change their positions. Because they think it would not be effective for their future. During their lifetime if something unpleasant happened for them such as lack of money or losing job opportunities or even diseases, they accept it as a bad fortune that God or the Earth wanted them to experience . Acceptance is an uncomplicated way to overcome problems in their lives. To sum it up, they trust their faith and come along with the hardships without regret.
On the other side, the other group of society believe in working hard and fighting for their targets. They never accept failure in life and take risks and make striving for their goals. They are the artists of their own life and make dissimilarities in order to write a beautiful life story. For instance, recently there is a well-known face and social media who is famous for her powerful voice, she got rejected by entertainment companies. Despite this, now she debuted with her first album and hit the top charts. To summarize , there are humans who give attempts to live the best of their goals.
To conclude, life has its own adversities, but it depends on the human’s aspect of view. The first group accept bad situations and the other group believes in their Venture. I strongly believe in the second group and fight for my dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70394736842 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48854009749 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3419593502 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2631578947 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165728474869 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496364313851 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495468939736 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106798664792 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344451437257 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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