some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the era, people could not guarantee their jobs or lifestyle. While some individuals believe that adapting to bad situations like an unwanted occupation or money deficiency is the best thing; however, others think that instead of accepting them, they can try to improve or solve those issues. This essay will discuss both views. In my opinion, I believe that the latter view is more reasonable.
On the one hand, a considerable number of people when they are struggling with undesired situations, they try to cope with them, and they prefer to set and watch the consequences. This is highly due to the fact that those individuals are afraid of taking risks. For example, if someone has an unsatisfied profession, they are more likely to stay in it instead of looking for their dreaming job just because they are scared of ending up without any jobs.
On the other hand, unlike those aforementioned folks, others tend to improve the bad situation that are facing such as shortage of money, since they could think more logically to solve this issue. For instance, a recent study shows that 75% of people now are more likely to have and work in two jobs as a result of the increasing demand for money. Therefore, there are several methods that one may follow in order to tackle any problems that may face.
In conclusion, even though there are people who tend to stand and watch themselves struggling with a particular situation, others would address the problem. In my opinion, although the first view is justifiable, the latter is more logical.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8679245283 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59365273926 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0033582864 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259635172536 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837113730406 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778825160771 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156349717304 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111676619317 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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