Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody has a unique way of reacting to the good and bad situations of life. These reactions can be caused majorly due to job and money. There are some people learn to live with adverse conditions like unsatisfactory job and low on money, while others do believe that it is possible to pull oneself out of it. This essay will discuss both of these perspectives, and try to reach a conclusion by the end.
There are a plethora of reasons why one would prefer to stay in a bad circumstance which may not be always be controlled. There are many working professionals who are not happy with their work and job title, yet choose to stay in it. This can be because the person is not well qualified to take up higher level role. In order to earn the required qualification, one has to dedicate some time to take up such course which may not be possible due to poor financial conditions or personal commitments. As a result of which they have to wait for years to gain appropriate experience to jump the ladder. Moreover, economic conditions like recession can have a direct effect of job market and money flow within a country. During times like this, there are many organisations that go out of business, hence leads to employees losing jobs. It is best to hold on to an existing job irrespective of personal dissatisfaction or less salary, as something is better than nothing.
On the other hand, with mere hard and smart work it is possible to reach dream job. People who choose to stay in unsatisfied job face many problems in long run, both mentally and physically. A sense of disappointment and regret develops in their minds, which consequently will effect their personality and life. There are many ill-effects that follow through, hence rather than such adversity it is better to take a chance and try and improve the situations as and when possible. For instance, if a person aims for a role that requires an additional masters degree, then in order to get promoted for that role, one can take a sabbatical and go for studies. The positive outcome of this may not be seen immediately, but will definitely make a difference and opens new paths of growth.
Lastly, in my opinion, it is better to snap out of a bad situation as quickly as possible as this will lead to long term happiness and self-satisfaction, which are quite essential to lead healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...in their minds, which consequently will effect their personality and life. There are m...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...rsity it is better to take a chance and try and improve the situations as and when poss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67224880383 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81906002515 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4984800218 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209692338853 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602903112344 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557413788959 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140085099443 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759839130171 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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