Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions
Many are of the opinion that it is an effective way to allow themselves to accept a terrible situation like frustrating work, and lack of money. Meanwhile, others hold that it is greater if they make an effort to improve such circumstances. This essay will delve into the logic behind both viewpoints and then present when I am more inclined towards the latter.
On the one hand, people who think that they should accept all bad situations as the best solution in their lives have their own rationales. Firstly, they are afraid of challenges with new things because of their difficulty. For instance, they hesitate to find new jobs, start up a business, found an organization. This leads to limit themselves to a safe zone and cannot have many opportunities to be successful in their career. Moreover, they are always satisfied with all of things that they possess. This means that they distract from following their dreams and develop to make lives better. They suppose that they have enough money and need to stop trying their best
On the other hand, it is also understandable why others argue that it is the best method if they focus on achievements and goals. First of all, they need to be out of awful situations; hence they want to have a greater future. For example, students make an effort to get a scholarship from universities. This means that they broaden their horizons and get a deeper insight into knowledge to have the highest salary in their occupation. Besides, they would be a successful person and contribute to society. In particular, they want to develop their nation and have an influence on many generations, raise their voice, and inspire many people.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of acceptance of bad situations, I still agree with those who think that they need to improve their lives and succeed in working.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88012618297 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68038207147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6384423662 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1470642107 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518368348658 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624906162326 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109017097552 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598497926603 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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